Poem -

The Light of You

Art My Own

The Light of You

Daydreams whisper to the minds eye
Shifting my conscience
Where I find thoughts
Slipping through a timeless chord
They ring
Sing
Your name

I rest in the infinite rays of you
My vision now a crystal clear view-
of the image you inspired to seed
Feed
Breath
Bleed into waking life

A dust filled cloud
In repose
Flickers
As your notions trigger

Like a storm
Its passive form transforms
New insights born

Pulsating
Creating
The atoms for making
Matter
Which will chatter
Vibrate
Clatter

The wonderful manifestations
You choose to infuse
I gaze
Amazed at your glorious array

A birds eye view
of your dazzling display
The strings to your bow
Grow as your seeds sew

My mind let’s go
Drifts soundly into your intrinsic hues
The effervescent
Incandescent force
Where the light of you blooms

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Jim "The Lad" ....

the combination of your beautiful work lifts my spirit!............Jim

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Gwendoline

Many thanks Jim for leaving such a lovely comment on my work today :) I am so grateful and thank you for the like too 
Gwen x

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Gwendoline

Greg thank you for the pin and for reading my piece x

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Jill Tait

Awwww so beautiful my lovely lass ❤️💕🌹

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Gwendoline

Thanks lovely for your wonderful words and pin 💗

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Tony Taylor

Your artwork is truly wonderful to behold.....and even more-so when brought to life with words that soar and inspire the reader to the heights of their own potential....... and suggests to the minds eye ~ the possibilities of spiritual growth and the light therein!!......Dear Gwen, so impressive is your artistic gift.....I feel fortunate to be a member of this site......keep up the great work dear poet sister......and thank you for sharing this with us all!!......PINNED!!......I Love the "Eyes" you create!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  :  )

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Gwendoline

Thanks so much Tony :) I do have a thing for eyes. Thank you for your wonderful and ever supportive words on both my writing and my art. Your insight is always enjoyed. I am so grateful to receive your kindness 
your friend 
Gwen x :)

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Marion

Your artwork is indeed stunning Gwen...you are truly talented. The art in itself speaks volumes as it is the essence of awakening or second sight. Your words show the beauty of your soul and what a truly spiritual person you are....a zillion hugs 💕 💕

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Gwendoline

A zillion billion hugs my lovely friend 💗 thank you for seeing both my pieces so deeply, I am thrilled to read your lovely insight. You know me so well 
hugs and love xxx 🌹❤️

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Shaun Cronick

Gwen I believe each go hand in hand and magnificently so.
Your poem of light and hope that reaches out and to touch a reader's heart to instil a sense of well being and awakening.
Gwen you can never, ever write a mediocre so so poem, a sausage factory colour by numbers poem.
Everything you write about and beautifully project is poetic crystal clarity and shines brightly.
And a further string to your artistic bow is your artistic achievement too.
A soulful image to mirror your equally soulful poem.
You have in you my friend the best of both worlds and I'm glad it's that way.x.

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Gwendoline

Wow my friend, I cannot thank you enough for your truly kind words. Thank you for supporting me and always leaving such wonderful in-depth feedback. For giving me your time. I am forever grateful. Your words are such an encouragement. Thank you for making me smile today with your lovely gift and insight. You give so much to this site. With your poetry and your attention towards others

Never stop being your lovely self. You shine brightly my friend

Your friend Gwen :) x 

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John Loopstra

As if you feel what my wife is and means/does to/for me. Well done, truly loved it with all my heart and words. 

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Gwendoline

Oh wow John that is a lovely reaction and tells me a lot about your beautiful wife. Your ability to see such beauty in her is truly a lovely thing to behold 

many thanks for reading my work :) 

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The fish of the sea

Gwen, I`m becoming really engrossed in your follow-through rhyme. It seems to become more of a signature in your work that just really shines in my eyes. 

I especially enjoyed this verse,

Pulsating
Creating
The atoms for making
Matter
Which will chatter
Vibrate
Clatter

SUPAR clever and compelling work Gwen. Inspirational. In all the best ways~

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Gwendoline

Thanks Max, for recognising a style in my writing. You are an attentive reader my friend. It shines here in the Cosmo :) 

Thanks for leaving your thoughts. I always enjoy your feedback 

Your friend Gwen 
P.S going to check and see if I have missed a poem on your page. Sorry if I have. I haven’t slept at all 🙈 

Take care 
Gwen :) 

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Gwen. Wow your artwork is beautiful coupled with your poem it's a utterly powerful read! I absolutely love the lines max pointed out. They are just magic! So spiritual in line with the universe and our whole being. I love it it. A truly imaginative unique spiritual write! With love Px

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Gwendoline

Thank you P for your beautiful feedback on this piece. I worked hard on it so your words mean so much ❤️x

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Neville

If I was to suggest that I am nothing more than just a little impressed I would be short changing you my friend .. and by far .. so take it from me, this is something else entirely ........... N :) x

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Gwendoline

Wow Neville what a delightful feedback, I am so grateful you chose to check out some older posts. Thank you for your kind words my friend 

Gwen :) x 

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Neville

Always a pleasure, ever welcome :) x

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