The new girl...
Say my name - just say it....
roll the sounds around your tongue.
Fashion your lips - to expel the breath-to create the word...
Just once look my way, not in that' just having a look around' way but seek me out...hold my gaze....just for a second..but long enough forĀ me to perceive it..
Let that glorious light of recognition illuminate your dark and impenetrable eyes, seeing the passion kindling in mine and knowing you have a power over me....
Feel the nape of your neck begin to shiver with anticipation of warm lips brushing that delicious spot you find irresistible,Ā
And as you walk past, brush my shoulder languidly....
Leave a lingering memory of your presence -Gucci 'Guilty Absolute'...are you ready to take a leap of faith?Ā
To smile and say 'hello you're new aren't you'
Show me the coffee machine!- point out the fire exit!-Ā ask me to dinner...anything ...but see me...just see me
All I ever see is you......
Ā
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This brought a real smile to my face ..remember the many office 'crushes' I had to go through!!! Very sweet and with a passionate overtone that is delightful-! love it xx
SteviecĀ Ā
Such sensuality from nothing but a gaze...such power in a look which speaks of true recognition and acknowledgement...is borne of experience, not merely creative imagination. We've probably all been there; yearning to be seen...really seen...by that person whom we can see only too clearly...even when our eyes are closed.
Beautifully, brilliantly captured and brought to life.
J ;)
Hi Jason, you are so right aboutĀ this being borne from experience!!! ...but mine was having a crush on a boy at school in the year above me- who I thought was soooo dynamic as he wasĀ a milk monitor and weirdly attractive asĀ he always had a strong whiff of plasticine about him!!he never noticed me tho....It stays with you forever I think!Ā Thank you for your lovely words and so pleased that you enjoyed it
Lodigiana xxx
A milk monitor with a strong whiff of plasticine about him?! Sounds like you were in love with Morph!! Well...the heart wants what the heart wants, I suppose...
J ;)
Hi Lodigiana, you really capture that new girl, the whole piece was so visual and filled with the longing to be seen and nervous tension of a work place crush
Brilliant
Lorna xx
Aw thanks so much Lorna! really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! Thanks again xx
LodigianaĀ
thank you so much Charles! really appreciate your comments and happy you enjoyed it- I actually really enjoyed writing it! xxx
LodigianaĀ
Hi, Lodigiana!
I very much enjoyed your poem and the narrative reads with such honesty. Your words layered with humor, sarcasm,longing and sensuality bring vivid imagery!
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LindiĀ Ā
Thanks so much Lindi. Always lovely that people take the time to comment- thanks again xx
LodigianaĀ
You are most welcome!Ā
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