Poem -

The Not so Brave Man

not quite a haiku .. from the anthology 'Victims of Indifference'

The Not so Brave Man

The Not so Brave Man

I am not the brave man you
once took me for 
I am truly frightened to let you go ..

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Gwendoline

Might not be quite a Haiku (I struggle with those) but this packs a punch my friend. Such a powerful statement many feel, that I am sure of. Wonderful write 
Gwen x 

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Marion

Clever clever play on words Neville and as Gwen says...packs a powerful punch x

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Neville

Thank you kindly Marion & truly tooly too :) x

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Tony Taylor

A STUNNER!!.......It's in the succinctness of its delivery where that "Powerful Punch" mentioned above is contained.....VERY well conceived dear poet brother!!......and ELEGANTLY delivered.....PINNED for perfection!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Neville

Thank you too Tony :) 

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