Poem -
The Ocean
Most, Inviting splendor,
A body of entice.
Rallying surrender,
Whatever is the price.
Stormy, savage water,
Such enchanting limbo.
Bringing men to slaughter,
For delving down below.
Unforgiving ocean,
Beauty with Profusion.
Much hypnoticΒ motion,
Brings forthΒ great Illusion.
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Gorgeous pen!
thanks Lisa xx
Thoughts......every where.....i need a life jacket.....enjoyed the read....all smiles
thank you Lorris, much appreciated xx
Lovely!
You make it seem so inviting...so hypnotically alluring. I think it's partly due to the wave patterns created by the trochaic trimeter (which is tough to pull off, actually!) and partly to the images you weave in front of the reader's eyes.
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J xxx
Thanks Jason, always very much appreciated XXX
Beautifully woven and detailed imagery..... painting lovely strokes for the minds eye of reader to enhance for themselves...... well conceived & delivered write my friend!!.......ALL STARS!!...... great read!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo. ?ββ΄β³
thanks Tony xx
Lovely versed and well worded well timed rhyme. I enjoy your talent and will have to read more. Peace to you.
Thank you :)