Poem -
The Orient Express *challenge*
Like 8 Pin it 1An exquisite way to travel,
Stellar and refined,
A dreamscape unravelled,
A legend of our time.Breathless stops of grandeur,
Champagne and good eating,
My wife, I look to thank her,
Romantic views in seating.Soon a mysterious dilemma,
in the cars far ahead,
On our journey to Vienna,
A voice cried out ' he's dead!'Our adventure of a lifetime,
Cut short by murder on board,
Held capture by Hercule Poirot,
A mass, a guilty horde.A killer sat amongst us,
Most had guilty sin,
However could he escape us?
Allow the scrutiny to begin.
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I love Agatha Christie!!! Really captivating the Orient Express and the emotions. I feel like this should entice those who haven't read her to do so as well as maybe a follow up from you :)
Thank you so much Emily. I'm always trying to write about different things. ?
Lovely work. Pinned cause I can
Thank you Lisa ?
Yay Simon!
I always love reading your writes :)
Hugs xx
Hi, thank you ? x
Great story telling technique!Β
Favorite part:
Thank you Katina it means alot ?
Excellent work Simon...thoroughly enjoyed the read...?
Thank you so much Marion ?
wonderful poemΒ
Thank you greg
My Dear Simon,
The moment that I learned of your challenge, about the Orient Express
I knew someone would incorporate the murder, and deftly it address
I shall endeavor to respond to it, but you've made it very tough
To approach it from another perspective, and hope it is not guff
All my love,
Larry xxx
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Thank you Larry, you're very kind.Β I really appreciate your support