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THE POETS POEM

THE POETS POEM

Pen to paper as you let
the words start to flow 
Wondering where is this
poem going to go 
What has inspired you today
what will you write
what has provoked a feeling 
for your words to take flight
You want to write that poets poem
the one,in which you will take great pride
The  poem of poems that came
from your soul, deep down inside 
when you start to write,your thoughts
are racing and the adrenaline is flowing
So you keep on writing while the 
creativity inside of you is growing
To write that poets poem, the one
that would make you feel,so sublime
A feeling that will take you, to seventh heaven
sat upon that cloud number nine.
 

  
 

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Richard Waters

Easy to relate to by anyone who has submitted to Cosmofunnel as they do all they can to express either emotion, idea or message in the most powerful way they can ! Your style is so beneficial to the dynamic of a poem on this topic.

Lovely write !

Warmest wishes to you !  :)

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Richard  I think the inspiration for this write
came from Tony when he wrote in a comment 
once this could be a poets poem and it stayed in my mind
I agree that everyone will relate to the feeling 
you get when you get emotion across or a message in your work
it makes me feel as i have said in my write, and i also 
feel it it when i read peoples work.
Thank you for your comments always a pleasure to read them
my Best wishes to you Debs 

 

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Richard Waters

Whatever your motivation for this write, the creation you shared is splendid !  :)

Best wishes.

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Deborah Evans

Thank you Richard 
Best wishes to you too  Debs 

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Valerie Lynn

"A feeling that will take you, to seventh heaven
sat upon that cloud number nine."

I love this!! Lovely write!

Val ?
 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Valerie Thank you for your 
your thoughts on this  one
i`m glad you enjoyed 
best wishes Debs x

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Greg Etsell

HI Deborah great poem every time I write one I hope every one likes it and says something when thay do what HIGH  I get from it then makes me come back agin thank you, peace and love xxoo 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Greg  Thank you for your kind words 
i agree such a good feeling to know 
people like your work 
Peace and love to you too xox

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Larry Ran

Hi Dear Debs,

Oh yes, "The Poets Poem"!  Just like the painterly painting, that special masterpiece that has flown so freely from his hands to the canvas.  Almost as if guided by an unknown  entity, to be recorded by posterities for all time.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Deborah Evans

Hi Larry Thank you for your
comments and support of my work 
means a lot  to me
 Love n hugs Debs xox

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Christopher Correia

I love the spirit tone and organic construction of this poem, deborah, yes you nailed the 'motivation' (for lack of a better word) that keeps the reader writing and posting poetry on this site....personally, when that 'longing' is gone to write the 'ultimate' standard bearing poem, what is really the reason to move the pen to write and post?  Wow what a fantastic thought to capture, it's poetry like this that reminds me that there really is a 'community' here, simple and beautifully expressed word play, really edifying, deborah....cheers friend

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Christopher Thank you for the great comments 
you explained how i wanted  this poem to read i totally agree 
with you that this is a community here, and we all i think, strive to
write that poem, I have learned so much here and i am still learning
Cheers to you too friend 
 
 

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