The Promised Land
Where would you like to be, in sunshine and mystery,
I'd like my mojo back sitting on the beach by the sea,
I was brown then as the photographer went by me,
he snapped a shot for time immemorial, permanently.
Now in that photo everything stopped, twenty five forever,
few of us can aspire to being in the land of never-never,
I was, with Peter Pan, stars and sprinkled magic dust,
Wendy, the dog, karma and something I could trust.
The divide between romanticism and classical you see,
you can fix my motor-bike, I'm chilling out as Zen taught me,
of course, we can't all have this idyllic unreal lifestyle,
I did, it could never be taken away, stay with me awhile.
Stay with me, to remove the drabness going so slow,
if you do, I'll welcome you and we can all be in the photo.
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I absolutely love this!! The photograph immemorial permanently....an excellent verse. I love the you have captured all this with a photo and then the reference to something magical and ending with the photo. To be out of this world. A different perspective. Just brilliant! Sssoo pinned!!! Px ?
Thanks so much P - I used your magic dust!
Love,
Terry.
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??? brilliant!! Magic exists then!! You are welcome to use it freely ? but dont tell the others ? ssshhh!!! Px ???
Terry you paint a picture so beautiful. Your words take us on a journey far fare away. Love it ! Take care my poet brother!
Thank you so much Sarfaz.
Wowww so entertaining and awesome esp if that is really your photo back in time caught in midair like a real life peterpan in beachy neverland. You are clever and spot on to say it n pun how time stood still then eh. I think I would love to have a pic taken like that in mid air.
kudos for this fabulous muses poem I enjoyed lots. !!!
plz pleez do read and comment on my newest poem too, plz don't forget to.
Thank you so much.