Poem -

THE QUIET POEM

Shush be quiet this is myĀ 
Queit poem when reading
My poem make sureĀ  youĀ 
Read and walk softly so not
Wake up my words their
sleeping so shushs okĀ 

OH NO!!! you woke up
My words now you did it
See what you did youĀ 
Woke up my wordsĀ 
I told you this wasĀ 
Quiet poemĀ  soĀ 
SHUSH BE QUIET!!!!!
So finish readingĀ 
And softly walk out
And be QuietĀ 
Because this my
QUIET POEM!!!!!

Ā 

Ā 

Like 3 Pin it 2
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Jill Tait

Haha I love your humour and imagination Greg & so enjoyed thisiun’ pinned my penfriend ā­ļøā¤ļøšŸ¤£šŸ’™ā¤ļø

Reply
author
Greg Etsell

thank you JillĀ 
i didnt sleep
much lastĀ 
night becĀ 
i was thinkingĀ 
of this poem

Reply
author
Jill Tait

Awwwww when you were all quiet and everything was Sssshhhhh lol šŸ¤£ā¤ļøšŸ’™ā¤ļø

Reply
author
Shaun Cronick

Greg after reading your QUIET poem I have visions of the late great Jerry Lewis and the also lateĀ  great Norman Wisdom both in a library writing their QUIET poems and then glorious madness ensues.
And love how your QUIET poem reaches it ever so QUIET and revealing most comic conclusion.šŸ™‚!!
Thank you for sharing Greg and catch up with more tomorrow for this poor poet is zonked and the land of nod calls and I think I have a headache coming on, don't know why?? But in the meantime...
Five DEAFENING stars, a LOUD like and a THUNDERING pin and well deserved.

Ā 

Reply
author
Greg Etsell

Good night shaunĀ 
hope you sleep well

Reply
author
Shaun Cronick

Nos da Greg and after today, I'll sleep like a brick and thank you my friend.

Reply
Poem -

Those gypsies and there...

Those gypsies and there tambourines

Deep in the woods by the river
The moon is full and the campfire
Is going the gypsies are...

Poem -

Crazy

I’m crazy about watching
The sunrise and I’m crazy
About Watching the sunset
But I’m...

Poem -

The Phoenix in the Sun

The Phoenix in the Sun

I have been told about
The Phoenix on top
Of the mountain so
That is where I Start my...

Latest poems in Comedy

Poem -

Within the threescore and...

Within the threescore and six orbitz that span my lifetime...

the impact of current
Fourth Industrial Revolution (4IR),
also known as Industry 4.0...

Poem -

OFF TO ANOTHER

OFF TO ANOTHER

FOOLS WEARING SHOES
CANT CHOOZE
TO THE RIGHT OR LEFT

BEHIND THINKING
IN...

Poem -

I possess an unusual knack...

I possess an unusual knack for making women bristle

hence immediately this birdman
wishes to escape into his eyrie
or seriously considers joining...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com