The Spaces Between
Freash empty air
Breezing through my hair
Cool running water
Clear crisp and clean
These are the spaces between
Darkness in the dead of night
The absence of all shining light
Seclusion and soft steady silence
Far away where I can not be seen
These are the spaces between
These are the moments
The sensations too often unused
In the noisy, busy chaos
Self is far too easy to loose
The absense of
The shedding off
The letting go
The empty
The quiet
The pure white snow
Cleansing
Cooling
Unburdening
Setting free
When I can not be found
In these places is where I'll be
These are the blank spaces
The openings
The passages and halls
These are the windows
The doors
The gaps in all of our walls
The spirit lives, all dear seekers
In the void
In the absence of
The without
The soul can be found
In the nothing
Just as faith
Is simply the absence of doubt
These are the gateways
And the portals
Away from everything
You'll never miss
These are the trails
And pathways
The entrances to eternal bliss
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Comments
Kind'a like reading between the lines, Twilla.
Quite often it's what isn't stated but implied that makes the greatest impact.
We shouldn't always take everything at face value.
Sometimes, the best sh!t falls through the cracks.
Nice writing.
~Dean ♫♪?♪♫
Inflating my ego to a dangerous size again dear High King of Horror! It will end up another deadly creature of yours terrorizing innocent town folk unbeknownst to me like Mr.Hyde if we don't keep a close eye on it with you and Tony around!
Beautifully penned!!!
xoxo
Leah
Thank you, Leah! ♡
Hey TWILLA!!.....The INTERVALS..... the subtle hints...... like the unveiling of a Mail-Order bride....... that place where true happiness lurks....... just waiting to be uncovered....... I like the imagery your phrasing creates ~
~ "The soul can be found
In the nothing....."
VERY compelling stuff dear poet sister!!......ALL STARS!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo ??✴✴❤?
Tony! ?? Thank you so much. I love your simile there! I guess it's my ode to quiet moments drinking coffee on my roof as well as my explination as to why I seem to suddenly vanish from existence at times.
So glad this one was so well recieved! Thank you all for taking the time! ?
Blank Portrait, even your comments are eloquent and poetic. I'm dumbfounded, honestly by the positive responses to my works by such talented writers. Thank You so much!
Hi twilla .. Just amazing . its a beatufull peace love how u walked each word by your hand. Everything on top came with you to the bottom of the sheet. Sharing it is a compliment to us. If you a mom hapoy mother day. ?????
Thank You, So Much, Joey! Yes I'm a mom of two, one has taken to calling himself my little geekling lol. I'm thrilled to know that my work is being so fully appreciated and well received!