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The Waning Tides

The Waning Tides

The memory has dulled
But the sensation remains
Through every yearning breath that burns
To uncoil the clandestine layers of pain

I flounder in the shadow of your absence
Haunted by the sough of the surrounding seas
This isle, my exile and wilderness to wander
In pursuit of a once abiding dream

Lost and lamenting, hence never to evade
This temperate yet wuthering shore
I caress the edges, at the invisible boundary
As the waves retreat and my heart submerges
Out from the unbounded ebb of yours

I live in lack of an illumined sense
Though offer hymns and incantations
Defying the past, but only to reap my debt
In a lacuna that forms my isolation

And I will shun the majestic moon
For the light of destiny it delays
Vanquishing stars in every blink of an eye
Obscured from the mystery I gaze

That is if you shall not return to me
Before my demise is due to rain
Let then the firmament fall
And this island sink below its mist
To uplift your shadowed veil

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Simon Bromley

Incredibly well written.Β  Captivating ink my friend all stars and pinned.

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Ian William

Thank you ever so much, Simon. Sincerely grateful for your feedback.

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Ella

awesome job!Β 

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Ian William

Thank you so very much, Ella. Always appreciated, thank you.

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Ian William

Thank you ever so much, Poetess. Such a delightful comment, thank you.

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Dean Kuch

"Haunted by the sough of the surrounding seas" ...Loved this line, Ian. Excellent alliteration and sounds of "s"...
While I enjoyed the entirety of this fabulous dark poem, Ian, the following was, by far, my favorite stanza:

And I will shun the majestic moon
For the light of destiny, it delays
Vanquishing stars in every blink of an eye
Obscured from the mystery I gaze

Outstanding--well penned!
?☠️~Dean Kuch~☠️?

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Ian William

Thank you ever so much, Dean, for your kind and incentivising words.

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Bernadete van d...

I am here, at page 6, The Waning Tides. Will keep reading the next pages. You have an impressive collection, Ian. I am wondering if you ever published a book? We see lots of noir writings out there, however, what’s missing is romance noir, like yours. Greetings, BΒ 

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Ian William

Thank you so much Bernadete for taking the time to read through my poems. I have never tried to publish anything before, you are the first person to ask that question, so I thank you again Bernadete.Β 

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