Poem -
The way I feel
Wet faced and alone Is this really how it’s supposed to be
No yet I’m sat alone even though those I love and trust are near
Prikily eyed with people around me should I really be feeling this way
No yet even I don't fully understand why I do
Alone again wanting to feel something yet when I eventually do I wish it would go away
Comments
I can so relate to this feeling! It's horrible, like hanging between to cliffs and not being able to reach either to escape. Amazingly written Lizzie!
Very true! Nicely written.. Not many people can relate to this feeling but it's good that they don't 'cause it ain't easy to overcome this! A few punctuation marks and spelling correction, this would be a really good one..