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A Worthy Wait

A Worthy Wait

She said  she would  wait for the  door to be opened by the right person

She refused to let others in,  as allowing them would have been like burglary

Her intent was to present herself intact, to lose her innocence to the right person

To someone who would hold and protect her heart, loving, caring for her with a concrete promise for an everlasting love and to cherish her gift of waiting

She never wanted it to be like losing something but finding something

Where she lose it, there her heart should be and remain forever

 

We all thought she was crazy

We said she was a fool for being so strong

We said it’s only a myth and a fallacy indeed

It’s just a first experience after all, like every other, we said

We reminded her that her ripening body would wither untasted in the vine

 

She said she could cross to our side and be like us

But we can’t be like her as we’ve only got one to loose, which we’ve lost

It’s like a bubble, one prick and it’s gone and can never be put back again

 

The moment she saw him

She knew why she’s waited

 A lover and a friend she  found in him

They  waited for the vows

 their innocence intact

They lost it to each other after the vows

A concrete promise and a tangible term of eternity

 

They say passion fades but theirs is a miracle

It’s several years now, and it’s as strong and ever-changing

As the first night they came together

She’s glad she waited and gave it to him

As it makes her feel prized and worthy

 

It was a worthy wait after all!

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Richard Waters

Amazing work showing your confidence at expressing what your heart understands.

Keep the wonderful writes coming !  

Best wishes. x

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Rose Sho

Hello Richard, Thanks a million for kind words. 

Thanks for the encouragement.

Lots of love

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Larry Ran

Hi Sweet Rose,

Worth the "wait" in gold, to bless your soulmate with your greatest treasure is the pure way it was meant to be.  The peer pressure today on young girls is deafening.  For the few that hold fast, the first union is not only opening her legs, but opening her soul and merging it with her mates forever.  You have written a wonderful story of the girl with the iron will, the girl that waited for the "Worthy Cause".

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Rose Sho

Hello Larry,

Thanks a so much for reading through and for your words of wisdom. It's really very difficult to "wait" in this generation. Nobody sees it as a treasure anymore. It's seen as "one of those things". But it takes determination and tenacity for one to be able to pull through the peer pressure.

Thanks a lot. I'm inspired

Hugs.....Lots of love

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