The You - The Me
Do you think of me
In the rising sea?
Where souls collapseĀ
Entwine and seeĀ
The paradoxĀ
Between the you- the meĀ
Betwixt translucent melodyĀ
Combined with ever lasting rhymesĀ
Which hold on hopeĀ
In fragment mindsĀ
Sublimely danceĀ
To ancient chimesĀ
The final chaseĀ
The end of timesĀ
So tell me
Do you think of me?
Within those wonders that you seeĀ
Or are you gently drifting by
To new horizons in the sky
Where never shall the twainĀ now meetĀ
For I am bound with weighted feetĀ
And hands scorched from a dying sunĀ
Each burn translates to times undoneĀ
Where worlds shall crumble in your quakeĀ
The conscience man at last awakeĀ
The seeds of life sewn in your seams
To live no longer inside dreamsĀ
Please tell me
Will you think of me?Ā
Beneath a sun I cannot seeĀ
Where stars no longer chart our livesĀ
All remnants of me has diedĀ
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beautiful Gwen!....................................................................................Jim
Thank you so much Jim :)Ā
wonderful poemĀ
Thank you Greg and for the pin too xĀ
Abfab My gorgeous Gwendoline ā¤ļøš¹ā¤ļø
Many thanks lovely and for the pin too ā¤ļø xĀ
Aww u so welcome Chickadee š¹š¹š¹
A beautiful, beautiful poem. Heartfelt to the the very core. Hugs x
Thanks so much for your lovely words Being MeĀ
hugs back xĀ
You are so very welcome. It's always a pleasure to read your work x
Simply Beautiful.. GwendolineĀ
Another Star you've Casted into the Cosmos universe.
Pinned!
Best wishes.
Wow such beautiful feedback Wilford. Thank you my friend xĀ
Worlds apart, lifetimes apart connected only by the threads we refuse to relinquish. Sometimes it feels they are entirely lost to us and other times their essence is more real than the life before us. A beautiful and sadly yearning write Gwen...stay strong ā¤ļø
Marion thank you for your amazing insight. Yes my mum and I were talking as she believes we planet hop. She hasnāt dreamt of my dad of late and was upset he might of moved on. So we were having quite the conversation, which led me to writing this. Life is so cryptic, especially when we lose those we love. Sending hugs lovely ā¤ļø
Wow simply exceptional piece Gwen! Reads beautifully!! Px
Thanks P for checking back on my poems :) always love hearing from you x š
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My HEART melted GWENĀ
you did it AGAINĀ
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Wow thank you my friend, so grateful for your words. Thank you so much for looking back on my poetry xĀ
that's sure one whole lotta love you just poemed & pinned to this page Gwen .. x
Wow Neville so sorry I almost missed this one. A thousand thanks for looking back on my work my friend, for your wonderful words, which bring such encouragement šxĀ
always a pleasure Gwen & always mine :) x
Gwen!! This is breath-taking and magical poetry!
Its like anĀ amalgamation of Poe, William Blake and Ella Wheeler Wilcox allĀ
woven into one. But all you.
Loved it and the message that beats and flows throughout.
A more than wonderful poem, an exceptional one and one that the old masters would have enjoyed reading.
A beautiful write all over and certainly one of your best, to add to so many.
Just when you think you've read it all, along comes something more than special.
Thanks Gwen and poetries highest kudos to you for sharing your gift. x.
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Shaun, I am so very very sorry to not of seen this absolutely beautiful comment sooner. I do not appear to be receiving notifications all the time from Cosmo. I cannot thank you enough for this sparkling feedback. You name some amazing poets that just makes me beam inside. Thank you ever so much š Finding these words now has truly giving me a boost I needed. So thank you Shaun for unwittingly fixing my morning today with your wonderful supportive words that just feed the heart and soul such encouragement. You are an amazing human Shaun. I am so thankful Ā to know you and to get to read your amazing works too šxx
GwenĀ