Poem - 22 May 2022, 11:04 there Dusk Arising there i found a place where the dunes fall to the beach and watched afternoon turn as families strayed homeward there. to think and feel. reflect and cry. to finally accept. there is no "why" Like 3 Pin it 3 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 767 Rating: Total votes: 2 Poetry Genre: Freestyle Listed in: Contest Entries 4 comments
Neville24 May 2022, 00:43 Anything less than full marks would be a crhyme against this art form we have such a passion for ........................... Neville Reply
Tony Taylor24 May 2022, 09:29 This is great DA!!......haunting is the right word.....but I think its the formatting that gets across the line!!......ALL STARS!!....you're a VERY creative soul my friend!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : ) Reply
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Absolutely deserving of five stars...a haunting reflective piece 🌹
Thank you Marion.
Anything less than full marks would be a crhyme against this art form we have such a passion for ........................... Neville
This is great DA!!......haunting is the right word.....but I think its the formatting that gets across the line!!......ALL STARS!!....you're a VERY creative soul my friend!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )