Poem -
'TIL DEATH US DO PART...
Looking back I can still rememberĀ
The way I felt when you loved me tender
Now Its clear, it was a world of pretend
A sick facade by a fraudulent friend
I'm so gullible, I should have known
I feel like I've broken every bone
Nowhere to hide, nowhere to run
Time for the justice which I call fun
I won't stop till I break your will
Dissecting you with a surgeons skill
Of my revenge I fantasize
To see the fear within your eyes
Armed with a scalpel and careful aplomb
I'll remove your organs one by one
I long to hear that soothing sound
When you cry out, and at last peace is found....
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LOVED THAT ! REVENGE IS SWEET X 5 FROM ME JASE
Cheers for the vote hun, oh and as for revenge....Ā the colder the better :)
Finally, you have joined the dark side Jason, this was a well thought out, carefully constructed and nastily executed piece. Ā I really liked this, from now on you are MRĀ DARKNESS ha ha. Ā A big high 5 from Ms Darkness lol:)
Cheers Rachel I knew it was in there somewhere, thanks for your vote of confidence X:)
Awesome write Jason!..If I give ya 5 will ya keep me alive? lol x:)
Aw thanks Kylie your a gem :)
great creepy Ā write voted and nomed x
Glad you enjoyed it Susan, thanks for the Nom :)
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Cheers Williams ;)
Great write Jason...
maddison
Much appreciated Maddison :)
LOVE THIS ONE!!! I must vote for this!!!
Val ā„
Glad you enjoyed it Val, your comment is appreciated thanks :)
Its just awesome...I truelyy loved it and got connected with it..I could imagine everything in front of my eyes..:) Big 5 from me..:)
Love
Surabhi
Many thanks Surabhi :)
very dark Jason...I like it alot :) 5 stars mate
Cheers John your a gentleman :)
Nice one marrow,some do need something like that lol.
Haha cheers mucka, and I totally agree lol, sorry Rachel :)