Poem -

Time

Time

Such sorrow in a single tear

borne of pain
bright with fear.

A shimmering prism of soundless screams

of empty words
forgotten dreams.

A swirling eddy of things no more

a future gone
a closing door.

A beautiful captor imprisoning hope

no support
no way to cope.

Liquid fire searing your skin

yet cold inside
darkness within.

Such sorrow in a single tear

to show you
why I left you here.

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Tony Taylor

VERY creative ink here girlfriend!!..... stellar formatting....propelling the closing of the door .....the end of the combinations potential..... laid out in piercing prose..... backed by impeccable timing and word choices..... leaving the reader to sigh at poems end.....ALL STARS!!...... well done DONNA!!...... miss reading your stuff my friend!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?āœ³āœ“ā˜€

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Donna Walton

You always bring a massive smile to my face Tony. Your comments are always so appreciative and you instinctively see behind just the words. You are my favourite critique, well maybe on par with our sweet mango lol. Thank you my friend.xoxo
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Deborah Evans

Hi Ā Donna Such a sad poem but so beautifully writtenĀ 

your words are heartfeltĀ 

Great write!Ā 

Best Wises Debs x

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Donna Walton

Thank you for taking time to read and comment. I really do appreciate it.xo

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