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Time In a Bottle

Time In a Bottle

Jim sang this so well, he would save every day like a treasure

And then he would give it away, for there never seems to be enough time

When you are doing the things that you love, singing, writing, painting, it is so delicate

In every way, and it should be saved in a bottle, and it should be kept away

And saved like the beauty in every day, not ever letting it fade

Not wanting it to ever part, always holding love, and life within in your soul, and heart

Let us spend the time, on things we want to do,  that mean the most, with the love, it can see us through

Each tender picture, each bashful smile, each starlight in your eyes

If I could save time in a bottle, I would do it, today, I would do it, tomorrow, I would do it, just for you

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Tony Taylor

WOW NANCY!!!.....I LOVE Jim Croce!!.........you did a great job referencing a few of the lines from the song within this write.........Leonardo DaVinci used to do that with his paintings.........little hidden messages.......so sorry I haven't been keeping up with your stuff lately.........don't worry.........we're gonna get to 1000(smiles)........this is fine work...........ALL STARS    PINNED      ........well done...........T xo

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Nancy Mcgowin

Thanks Tony, appreciate it, there have been such great artists,, singers, who left this world too soon in life.

Wish you well, Happy New Year!

Nancy

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