Poem -
To walk through hell together
To hold hands through hell.
Watch the world collapse around us.
Feed off each others fire,
Instead of burning.
That’s all I wanted..
But I let go of your hand…
Now you're alone.
And so am I.
I wasn’t able to hold your hand tight enough.
When we both burned in flames.Â
Your hand gripped mine even tighter.
Despite the extra pain it gave you.
But when you flared up.
I couldn’t hold onto you.
The pain was too much for me.
I wasn’t ready to handle it.
So I let go…
Now…
Now I'm burning even more.Â
Because little did i know..
That by not holding your hand,
It would bring me more fire to burn me.
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Comments
Love this. Powerful message and passion. Such a roll of a dice the game of love is. Though in my opinion one worth taking. Really torn feeling in this one. We have all been there beforeÂ
Sadly yes. A lot of people have been through it. But it is always a lesson that we have hopefully learnt
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Quite the goosebump read. You expressed perfectly that utter deep filled regret that can sink us. Where we don’t realise until it’s far too late. I loved the imagery and use of fire in this. A very creative and deeply moving writeÂ
Gwen :)
Thank you so much:) I only hope that this will maybe remind people to think through their decisions before you let someone go. The pain is a lot and no one deserves it.
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