Poem -
Devil I know
I want to be in bed fast asleep.
Dreaming that maybe I'm okay.
That tomorrow stays far offÂ
Some place else.
Yesterday felt more like myself.
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Should have stood my ground in the sun
Like the summer would want.
Not hide away
Like a vampire does,
His heart a ghost town.
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Regret when your whole life's aheadÂ
Of you means sand's ticking away.
Kill you slower than a thousandÂ
Cuts people say.
So will I stay never quite okay.
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“Should have stood my ground in the sun
Like the summer would want.”
This’s a great line.
Rory, the Summer still wants you to stand your ground in the sun.Â
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I think so too
In full disclosure once I had the first stanzaÂ
I had this line to use upÂ
Originally it was
We should have lived in the sun
Like summer would wantÂ
An attempt of mine trying to be romantic.
Instead it became a metaphorÂ
For me living like a vampire.
All well.
People, don't throw away your lines!
Work them until they work.