Poem -
Tongues
"What's your name?" Temptation
I've never felt sexual tension
Quite like you
Your average looks,
And your average hair
And your average touch
And your average care
But that spark
That ignited me,
In that hour of rush
And heat
And tongues
Is something i'll never forget
And you can bet
I'll come again soon
E.T.
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Excellent write! Â Love the sexy "temptation" in this piece! Â Well done!
Thank you for the kind words!
It was fun to write!
very sexy write loved it congrats on being nominated!
thank you! i'm pleased with the outcome!
Well written. Draws passion from a common memory. I like how it is personal but vague so as the reader I can't help but go my own experience through your words.
I'm glad it brought back memories for you! This poem was entirely based on a memory, not an extroidinary memory, but a pleasant one.
I'm glad it brought back memories for you! This poem was entirely based on a memory, not an extroidinary memory, but i pleasant one.
Oh that spark that alights the sensual flames within. Sexy romantic piece, very nice ;)
Definitely one of my favourite memories! Haha, glad you enjoyed it Karen! :)