Poem -

Touch Of Paradise

Touch Of Paradise

I reminisce by the Ocean where waves never slumber.
My mind glides over its surface as I interact within its blanket.
The sun baths its rays as I submerge in its effect
the clouds straying to perfect the day.
Tranquil is the shore as it shimmers golden.
It is here that stress drowns through breathtaking.
Open water has invited me into rugged,
where thought becomes tame through a lapping caress.
Its seduction breezes the senses. Its song, wild and free.
A wilderness of majestic normality has opened its arms
and I am in awe as beauty touches my skin.
As the Sea welcomes me in,
my soul is one, with paradise.

 

Like 1 Pin it 1
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Tony Taylor

Hi SUSAN!!.....wow!....."A touch of paradise' indeed......this is one of those writes that takes you away into its intent......I could feel the tranquility....the meditative quality.....the warmth that comes with understanding oneself ......the uplifting nature of reaching Nirvana......the tie that binds when realizing that we are all a part of something much bigger than ourselves.....the comfort we find in knowing that paradise is possible!!....ALL STARS! & PINNED!!....an absolutely GORGEOUS piece of poetic prose!!......Beautifully penned dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

Reply
author
Susan Chetcuti

Thanks so much for reading Tony. I really appreciate your view on my writing😊

Reply
Poem -

A Step Into Christmas

A first taste of Christmas - true story

A Step Into Christmas

There was a time when Christmas had a dimmed light.
It had no place in the dark and was kept from...

Poem -

Autumn Rose

Tranquility

Autumn Rose

Curiosity lured her there as a fragrance touched the air.
It was at a place when the end of Spring...

Poem -

Love Story

Message in a Bottle

Love Story

There was once a sacred message that had been thrown into rugged.
An emotion that had come from...

Latest poems in Drama

Poem -

STAND FOR NOTHING FALL FOR...

STAND FOR NOTHING FALL FOR EVERYTHING

You wanted to be taken seriously?

When asked...

You didn't know what you were fighting for...

Poem -

TRYING TO SAVE THE HOUSE OF...

TRYING TO SAVE THE HOUSE OF THE MOUSE?

When it wasn't broke...

They broke it...

Now, they want to fix it?

Doesn't it seem...

Poem -

Unbearable images

Unbearable images

Unbearable images.

It's not good to look through your window just before going to bed...

...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com