Poem -
Turning Back On Love
Tied,bound to the clouds of her shame
He walks away silently tired of her games
The love he thought was real ,so sweet
She choose to live another path down the wide road she went
Perpetual thoughts circle in his transfixed mind
So much sacrifice,so many sleepless nights
Why did she not give her full heart instead of cold and dreary reoccurring bad memories ?
Her indiscretions were caught as he walked in on his love doing it on the bedroom floor
Rage filled his thoughts,blood pressure is rising high
Time to walk away no tearful goodbyes
Not understanding why his love was not enough
Turning his back on her for the last and final time
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Rock what's going on. Enjoyed this one man, you give this picture perfect justce of a story come to life. You got some talent and imagination giving pictures its worded imagery beyond. Iam having a little trouble with that seventh line, im thinking did doesn't belong still I understood it anyway. Peace man.
Been there. Done that.
Hey Kimmy thanks for your comments. I have not been there done that but sad for those who have . Nothing worse than having someone you love cheat on you. Breaks the spirit inside .cheers rock
ROCK!! ~ swear to God you have a gift for bringing pictures to life............a God given broadness.......... keep 'em coming' bro.......... because where you're heading with these interpretive narrative's is undone territory........ or at least no one has taken it all the way.......... yet!!.......... well done..........T xo
Hey t thanks for the nice compliments . I try very hard to pull the reader in and hold them for the entire write. The picture was just lucky to find but the story came easy to me believe it or not . Cheers to you bro ,bradford