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Unfortunate Fellow !

Unfortunate Fellow !

Life has ridden rough-shod over me

I'm down for the count begging for mercy !

How can so much go wrong at one time ?

Everywhere I'm looking for a welcome sign

That fortune will return to this wretched soul

And I can pull myself out of this hole !!!

Things weren't always happening like this,

Normal times and my sanity I constantly miss !

Before my problem I was known as a lucky chap,

But now I'm victim to every conceivable mishap !

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Tony Taylor

I'm crying Sir Richard!!  ~ seriously!!...........I know in my soul........exactly what every nuance of this write means!!.........it brings me tears because.........I can intuit the fact........that there is NO bullshit here.........just the crushing reality of that moment you realized........that you're no longer the man you once KNEW yourself to be.........and THAT MOMENT is deadly.........to your self esteem.........to your gratitude........but then there comes a moment when you find the importance in this new path..........Hell, I love you man........cyber-love or not!!...........it's real..........thanx for sharing this write........big balls brother!!.........smiles..........T xo

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Shalini Samuel

I could see the soul that realizes that its being ignored.... feeling ignored is the very worst hurt a man can give to another living being... Luck doesnt bring fortune, its a mans will and hardwork that brings home fortunes.... a nice poem...

a black cat never crosses when we go out.. its we who cross him and hinder his walk...

:)

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Richard Waters

Thank you so much for your insight and appraisal of my work ! A lovely contribution to the piece !

Best wishes to you !

:)

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