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Unsure

Unsure of what to do. 

Unsure of what to expect or say to make these problems go away. 

Not sure what to endure to make you happy. 

Not made up my mind how to feel. 

Is the insecurities insinuating, stimulating the already annoyed. 

Path is troubling, path is complicated, full of uncertainty and who, what, when, where , why  the unsure roundabout of the unsurpassed. 

Not a fool, nor a profit, not necessarily nothing but unsecured, unsure about anything else but the love I give away. 

They call it a labour' of love for good reasons. 

Unsure how supportive anyone can be with  unsure to chase. 

Breakthrough only relates to bleeding. 
Breaking the heart of the world with unique needs. 

Unsure is at least honest.
stirs the yearning of the 
pretend to be. 

Value your unsure but hold its rains tight. 

Comfort your understanding it will break your heart otherwise. 

Pleasure acompanys pain. 
Woe acompanys deep thought. 

Happiness acompanys sadness. 

None of it ever comes free. 

Unsure if there is, the right path , or life's sweet illusion. 

The flicking of the lights. 
I am humble stop beating. 

I am very sorry for the unsure that rubbed off onto you, because you love me. 

One can only be so strong alone. 
 

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The fish of the sea

Sense of speculation for me Liliana! Cool write. Peace to you! Best wishes. Your friend Max

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The fish of the sea

XD, fictitious, but prefer it over mine anyway, Marion got bored of calling me Fish so that's where it came from lol, Kudos again, Best wishes

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Liliana of the ...

Good wonderful Marion. 
Cool,  names aren't people, just a word to get individual attention anyway, care about you. Always. 

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The fish of the sea

XD, she is wonderful, isn`t she? But very true! So true in fact it has inspired me, Names aren't people love it. Aww thanks, Liliana care is what makes the world go round and not decay into darkness! Back at you! Best wishes!

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Being Me

Liliana, this is written in a lighter style to a lot of yours. Nut though it is lighter in style the gravity of the meaning is still there. The poem is strong and powerful but the last few lines give it even more of a power boost. Very well done. I love this 👏👏👏 x

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Liliana of the ...

Lighter that's quite the compliment to someone between the light and the Dark. Thank you for your encouragement. No one else has clapped there hands at what I had to say.
So very grateful. 
Rose's and sunshine to you. 

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Being Me

Hugs...the claps were well deserved xx

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