Poem -
Untimely End
Beneath the untimely dejectionย
Forced when life was sucked out of your lungs.ย
As I looked at you all blueย
A rage inside grew
First denial of what my eyes could seeย
And that at some point youโd come back to me
Walkthrough that doorย
Arms opened wideย
Jeering with a rye smile โsurprise.โย
But nothing.....only an empty spaceย
Time has taken you out of placeย
And now I feel lifeโs such a waste
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Comments
Very sad. It hurts so much when you lose someone you love...whether by death or by losing them to another. It is a pain you carry for the rest of your life. I am so sorry for your loss x
Thanks BM ? sometimes I fixate on the fact they donโt exist here anymore, and my head and heart struggle to accept it. Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts which I am always grateful to receive ?x
wonderful poemย
Thanks, Greg for reading and the kind feedback x
beautifully etched pen!
Thanks so much for reading and commenting. So sorry this is lateย
Gwen there's nothing worse in this life than to lose a loved one so dear and cherished to one's heart. Your forlorn and touching poem states that heartache.
It is hard, so hard to try and move on, a constant struggle and in all hearts in all people's who endure we go for the other loved ones around us and never forget those we love and miss so much.
Take care Gwen and simply do the best you can and rely on the support offered by family and friends.
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