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VALIDATION

VALIDATION

She is crying out....inside
Her pain goes unnoticed
Motionless,
Expressionless.
She feels the need....
She wants to bleed....
To be alive...
The time has arrived

This time she must succeed.

To ask why means ...
She is no longer shy
And with nothing to hide
There is naught to deny

Thus emotions can proceed.

Once again..
She then takes this pain
To centre stage!
As opinions engage...

And at that very moment
There becomes a change..
In stagnant thoughts
As they rearrange.

   Who is culpable?
      Who was  liable?
        This condemnation...undeniable..!

Until this point
Now pointed out
A beautiful duo
Once full of doubt
Have now sewn their passions
Hence a seedling did sprout
Then a flower did bloom
As love showered their drought.

And the rain
Consumed blame
Yet no cloud overhead
Could darken the dither
As a new light was shed

To acknowledge emotion
I second that shout
For Validation ..!
Is what its all about..!

Carey Milton..  ©

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Carey Milton

Admiration reverberated back at you with adulation..!!

Sis C xx

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Tony Taylor

You're such a good writer Carey.........love this write!!..........Stellar formatting...........love the way you bring light to the ending...........write on sister girl!!............smiles.............T  xx

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