Poem -
V.E Day
War is over !
Celebration of the highest order
One hell of a day .
So many drunk , But hardly any disorder
In those days , People knew how to behave …
Jubilation ! God save the king !
Lusty patriotic songs did we all sing
The war in Europe was over
We'd completely forgotten the poor sods
- Still fighting in the far East ….
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Comments
Well written, happy V.E Day
Thank you for your words Simon , hoping you had a happy and healthy VE day too :)
Hi Chris. Fab write. Happy VE Day. Xx
Thank you Pratibha , I thought it was too important a day not to write something about . Wishing you a happy Sunday Xx :)
Chris this is absolutely amazing. Such a poignant write. Words of remembrance and truth. A great write. More please!
Good evening Safraz and thank you for your kind words , I have a fair few more poems and a few short stories within Cosmofunnel if you would like to read them , if so I hope you find them interesting ! Wishing you a happy Sunday and thank you again for your review :)
Huge congratulations Chris!! You must be so pleased you are one of the winners for May contest!! Px ?
A good write. So many drunk, remembering those who did not come home.
I saw a lot of meaning in this and appreciate your sharing it with us.
Good evening Randall and thank you for your kind words and positive feedback .I’m glad you enjoyed the poem and hope you find some of my other works interesting, Thank you again and hoping you have enjoyed a nice Sunday , Chris !
Short and sweet!
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Good work!
I really like this poem, it’s simple to the point and reminds us all there is pretty much all ways a war raging somewhere. Thanks.
Its my pleasure Garth and I'm glad you enjoyed . Its my most commented on poem here so I must have done something right ! Yes , You are right re there does always seem a conflict somewhere in our world at the moment .