Poem -
Volatile
Spume spews and effervesce,
Simmering, teetering explosion,
Bubbling ensue to cause a mess,
Riptide and corrosion.
Mental spasm and tensely grit,
Heat and eyes narrow squint,
Rationality and morals split,
Pursuit of rage on rooted stint.
An abundance of decay in thought,
Festering upon wordy battle,
Fashioned calamity wrought,
A rarity to make me rattle.
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Comments
another spectacular write Simon
Thanks Lisa π
Magnificent choice of words, Simon! Perfect for bringing out the desired emotion of rage!
Thank you Ian π
Excellently described, you've dug deep into it and expressed it masterfully here. Love it ππ½ππ½ππ½
Thank you kindly SD. π
Stunning use of words Simon. I also like the format.
Great writeΒ - SydΒ
Thanks Syd π