Poem -
Waiting
You’re still carrying todays burden, I can see
But just look to your window, that’s me
I’ve waited there all day
Well, between naps I do have to say
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I watch you enjoy every mouthful
And I know you can feel my stare,
You see I’m waiting right beside you
Oh so patiently, for my share
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I head toward the cupboard
And hope my little yap you will heed,
So I’ll wait just below the drawer
You know, the one that holds my lead
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As dark clouds gather above us
And our walk delayed by bad weather,
I feel soon, the rain will pass
So we will sit and wait together.Â
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Comments
Hey JOHN!!.....I agree with C!!....this is so nonchalantly gorgeous....and I especially like that it comes from the dog's perspective....I have never been a dog lover until I met Cherie....and yes....I fell in love with her Australian Shepherd.....he actually likes me!! (whew!).....I was bitten twice when I was young so I've always been a bit "Stay away from me".....but no longer.....anyway, I TOTALLY related to this beautifully delivered poetic discourse the dog has running in his train of thought!!......ALLSTARS!!......well done dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ?❤
Thank you so much Tony, for your kind words. I really enjoyed writing this one, it felt natural.
cheers mateÂ
?JohnÂ
My Dear John,
Another beautiful write from the mind of a true lover of dogs.
I give you a Haiku in response.
Wait by the window
Till my daddy comes back home
To share all our love
All my love,
Larry xxx
John, this Is a beautiful poem absolutely love It from start to
finish
Thank you so much Johnny great to hear that.Â
Thank you Larry, so glad you enjoyed it, I knew you'd appreciate the interaction from the dogs point of view.Â
take care my friendÂ
JohnÂ
Thank you Larry, I knew you would appreciateÂ
x JohnÂ
Thank you so much JohnnyÂ
Hi John,
I think you were describing my little Rosie, whose at my side as I write this. ?
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JP
John, this has stolen my heart. Words are beautiful and apt.... And that picture! That is soooo like the way my Oscar gazes out of the window (except he is a black Lab). Great writing, my friend x
Thank you Tina, one of my favourites, I used the weather as a metaphor for bad times and it , to me shows how the love of a dog can surpass everything.Â
John x
Oh... They help us through, to be sure x