Poem -
Water
Ferocious rain leaps
Bounding up from the pavements
Flowing fast it sweeps
Into streams endless engravmentsΒ
Forced out into seas
Moving freely now, it slows
Fluidity with ease
Heavy rising tide, it grows.
Fluctuating heat
Makes a liquid into solid
Freezing capsules meet
As a sculpture becomes stolid
Fire makes ice bleed
secreting droplets of hue
Feeding oceans need
Into a body of deep blue
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Comments
Agreed!! Enjoyed the theme and structure, Lorna. Strange... I feel as if I can come up with so many analogies for water. It truly is the essence of life. Enjoyed!
It really is and a very powerful force of nature, tha is for reading
Beautiful imagery created here
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"Fire makes ice bleed
secreting droplets of hue
Feeding oceans need
Into a body of deep blue"
Just lovely wording and fluidity. An enjoyable read indeedΒ
Gwen x
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it, I like a little rhyme from time to timeΒ
xx
Water in all its forms I'd beautiful.and therapeutic I think...lovely write x
Thanks marion, it was a therapeutic write, so many different forms just like my head HahaΒ
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