Poem -
Waves
Hidden Truth
Deeper
meaning, hidden
truth. Trying to
look at a different,
point view. Watching my
words, thinking it through, talking my
talk. I`m looking for you.
Punching holes, I stole
your poisoned heart
and your
Soul.
Words
mean nothing
without action, without
voice, comfort or meaning.
Funny how that`s really something,
so many believe in
but each to
their own.
Causes
Unknown.
The Fish of the Sea
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Comments
Interesting to see you're trying to generate waves in your lines. In this respect, Chinese is a perfect choice:)
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Yeah, trying something different for once, also that amazing! Wish I continued my studies when I was younger now... Thanks for your kind comment. All the best. The Fish of the Sea
This is such an amazing poem, it has hit my core. It's so true, well done. its a great write
Awww thanks so much, Bell! I`m glad it resonated with you so much. You have no clue how much your kind words mean to me. All the Best and kind regards. The Fish of the Sea
Love it. Your Wonderful personality shows though.Β
Awww thanks so much Liliana, I'm back now! Meetings take so long sometimes... I'll have another look at your piece now, probably more impressive then you found this. Lol. Thanks again, you kind comments always mean so muchΒ
you are the most popular one here.....best wishesΒ
Awww Lorris, it may seem like that, but maybe it's just cause I comment heaps lol, I really enjoy looking and reading other people's work. Maybe more than writing... I just feel really appreciative, because I remember when I was the newbie here. Really I still am lol! I appreciate your kind comment as always though, your a par above my work. All the best. The Fish of the Sea
Great poem Fish and also such a great structure to this write
- SydΒ
Awww thanks so much Syd, just wanted to try something different, I'm sure I'm not the first! Lol, thanks for taking the time to write your kind comment. All the best, your friend, The Fish of the Sea
Fish of the sea, I will follow your poems, just read waves and liking your style a lot, all the best to youΒ
Awww thanks, Keith, support of poets like you really help me keep going, not going to be a new poem today though... working on something big! Thanks for the follow though, back at you! I`m going back now to have a look at a few more of your works ;). Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea
I've been missing for a while, so busy with work etc, it's nice to get back n check out the siteΒ
Yes! We all how our busy lives... and yet the sight has been really busy as well, so many talented poets out and about... I look forward to reading your future works too! (Still looking through your account) Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea
Superb masterpiece. it is such an honor to read a gifted writer
Awww thanks so much Lisa! You have no clue how that means to me! Coming from someone like you. I`m really glad you liked it. Thanks again for taking the time to leave your generous words. I truly appreciate it. Kind regards, your Friend, The Fish of the Sea
This is a great write, intriguing to read and highly effective in set out.
ββββββIt compels the reader to stop and ponder the wordsΒ
Awww thanks so much Pen! Sorry for the late reply, weekends for me are poetry free! But your kind words really mean so much. I'm glad you liked it and posted your generous comment. Thanks so much. Ki d regards. The Fish of the Sea
I can see that I voted previously, could have sworn that I commented...?? So sorry Mr fish!Β Unique and enjoyable read my friend, your work is a pleasure to read and it is a pleasure to know you on Cosmo..hugs
Awww thanks Marion, its fine! Your comments do means so much though, it's really appreciated. Sorry I haven't been online much, weekends are for family for me. And the pleasure is all mine Marion! Kind regards and Hugs to you! Your friend, The Fish of the Sea
Aw you are so sweet you know, I didn't come on here for 6 months at one point so never apologise for that....family first always my friend π
Awww thanks so much, because I have been quite frequently online, I just didnt want to look like I was ignoring your comments. Again I always appreciate them so much. Kind regards. Your friend. The Fish of the Sea