Poem -
We against the worlds mess - Fish Edit
Original posted by Dominique Ryan on 22nd January
The universe, the energy, a world, a race
Problems and perspectives, Natures Mother,
We must face.
Floods, bush fires, storms, earthquakes
And we still fight each other, all through that state.
Wars, religion and political decisions,
Mental health, help guides, the rhythm
Elderly forgotten and Covids winnin`
Children hungover and the years tick over.
Where people still walk barefoot…
"Haven`t got a penny?"
Well I say we have plenty
Plenty to give.
And to share
Feels like 1 to 0 right now.
But to not stand together.
Is simply unfair.
The Fish of the Sea
With acknowledgement and the approval of the original Author. No Copywrite in place.
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Comments
Wow max think it just about list most of the problems in the world!! Its a great title and a great little piece of write on the topic. I dont know what the original was like so cant compare but it's nice for the original author to see their work is creating an impact...so much so that you took his write, edited it and credited it. Px
Wow thanks so much P! Highly recommend the original too, she's a great writer!. I'm really glad you liked it, I enjoy editing and reposting in an attempt to get their poem the recognition it deserves! Peace and smiles to you my friend. Stay safe! Kind regards. Max
Well said and well championed Max, never read or heard this before and a powerful piece to give anyone food for thought and act on, hopefully.
As the old adage goes... from little acorns.
Thanks for presenting this and you're clearly a man of poetry honour for not claiming it for yourself.
Take care and total respect to you.
Ah! Thanks so much Shaun, I highly recommend the original too! Shes a great writer my friend. Peace and smiles to you always. Max
Yeah it's so sad to bear witness to mother earth still making beautiful memories and things, miracles even.
When crumbling.
Thank you mother ship.
Agreed. Thanks so much Liliana. I'm really glad you liked this one. I highly recommend the original too. Peace and smiles to you my friend. Max