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WEEKLY CONTEST (I AM A GHOST IN LOVE)

WEEKLY CONTEST (I AM A GHOST IN LOVE)

I live in this castle I died 500 years ago I am the ghost that lives here I don't know how I died if some one killed me or if I fell down the stairs,I can walk the halls and go though walls,I am not brave ghost IĀ am scared of my own shadow and will hid when any one comes by,No one as live here for long time, THEN!!! The other day some one moved in a beautiful lady a blondeĀ Ā blue eyes skinny,WOW!!!! I must go and hide for I am a ghost and I must haunt this place but how do that I am scared of my own shadow,I see her agin and agin and I begin to follow her,I think I am in love my heart begins to beat my body begains to skake, she cant see me but that is going to change, I bring her flowers from outside and put tham on her bed and walk by her and whisper in her ear, I play lovely music so she know its me, I am a ghost in love my heart beat louder I feel alive but I am not, I open doors and windows to let her know its me,Ā One night lot people come over to the castle as thay sit around the table I felt this strange force pulling me in and then I was in someone body thay ask me who I was what are you doing here so I told tham I also told tham I was a ghost in love with the lady thay all laugh, Then I heard some strange words and saw this white light and started to go to it,Now I get to the end and see the gates and wait my fate I know I am not to late the LORD lets me inĀ  after 500 years and now I am in peace , IAM A GHOST IN LOVE,

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Jason Brown

This sad tale resonates with so many and the (relatively) hopeful conclusion is a humane way of giving your ghost some peace at the end of half a century of despair and yearning.

{Don't forget to leave a comment on BookWorm's ghost poem to let her know that you've entered...if you haven't already}

Lovely poem...once again.

J ;)

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Greg Etsell

thank you Jason yes I did tell bookworm thanks agin for reading

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BookWorm

Thank you for informing about leaving a comment, Jason Brown.

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VladimirMaskva_...

homie i love that castle that look like some ireland castle yu got words that match that castle, man i love castles

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Vladimir I like castle to I don't know where this castle is but it fits my poem thank you so much for Ā reading

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

A ghost scared of his own shadow...

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Classic!

BOO!!

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Barbara Niedan

Who thought you could feel sorry for a ghost? Sweet,lost,and vulnerable.Just the right ending
for this wandering soul.lovely

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Greg Etsell

thank you Barbara ghost can be nice thank you for reading

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