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WEEKLY CONTEST (I AM A GHOST IN LOVE)

WEEKLY CONTEST (I AM A GHOST IN LOVE)

I live in this castle I died 500 years ago I am the ghost that lives here I don't know how I died if some one killed me or if I fell down the stairs,I can walk the halls and go though walls,I am not brave ghost I am scared of my own shadow and will hid when any one comes by,No one as live here for long time, THEN!!! The other day some one moved in a beautiful lady a blonde  blue eyes skinny,WOW!!!! I must go and hide for I am a ghost and I must haunt this place but how do that I am scared of my own shadow,I see her agin and agin and I begin to follow her,I think I am in love my heart begins to beat my body begains to skake, she cant see me but that is going to change, I bring her flowers from outside and put tham on her bed and walk by her and whisper in her ear, I play lovely music so she know its me, I am a ghost in love my heart beat louder I feel alive but I am not, I open doors and windows to let her know its me, One night lot people come over to the castle as thay sit around the table I felt this strange force pulling me in and then I was in someone body thay ask me who I was what are you doing here so I told tham I also told tham I was a ghost in love with the lady thay all laugh, Then I heard some strange words and saw this white light and started to go to it,Now I get to the end and see the gates and wait my fate I know I am not to late the LORD lets me in  after 500 years and now I am in peace , IAM A GHOST IN LOVE,

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Jason Brown

This sad tale resonates with so many and the (relatively) hopeful conclusion is a humane way of giving your ghost some peace at the end of half a century of despair and yearning.

{Don't forget to leave a comment on BookWorm's ghost poem to let her know that you've entered...if you haven't already}

Lovely poem...once again.

J ;)

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Greg Etsell

thank you Jason yes I did tell bookworm thanks agin for reading

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BookWorm

Thank you for informing about leaving a comment, Jason Brown.

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VladimirMaskva_...

homie i love that castle that look like some ireland castle yu got words that match that castle, man i love castles

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Vladimir I like castle to I don't know where this castle is but it fits my poem thank you so much for  reading

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

A ghost scared of his own shadow...

Classic!

BOO!!

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Barbara Niedan

Who thought you could feel sorry for a ghost? Sweet,lost,and vulnerable.Just the right ending
for this wandering soul.lovely

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Greg Etsell

thank you Barbara ghost can be nice thank you for reading

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