Poem -
What I Feel
The burning desire of love, the passion of my heart
Thirst without .a drink, happiness with out a smileĀ
A cry from my eyes without. a tear
To awaken in the night, from dreams I can not explain
Who are those faces in my brain, have I met them on the street
What I feel right now, is what I feel every day
I am so mesmerizied, and yet so confused
I feel addicted to my feelings Its what I really feel right now that scares me
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Comments
Hello Nancy,
such a power set of words here. It gives the reader a good sense of craving, and numbness. An inability to express the complexity of our feelings. And yet at the same time this piece tells the reader how easily led we are by feelings. A really good write āļø
Gwen :)
Thank u so much for you beautiful words of appreciation
I am thsnkful for your lovely comment
Nancy
Hi NANCY!.....I agree with Gwen wholeheartedly.......you have captured a sense of needing to and wanting to stay inside your feelings.....that 'addictive' sense you have carved out so well here!!.......ALL STARS!!...well done dear poet sister!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoĀ :Ā )
Dear poet brother
Thank you for your gracious read
xoxo Nancy
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Stunning write my friend š¹
Thank you so much for your warm and welcoming comment
I truly appreciate it Nancy