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When Love Sets Sail

When Love Sets Sail

The harsh caress of loneliness means nothing when in love.
For every day I had you I thanked God high up above.
When twilight fell, you stayed with me,ย my beacon in the night.
Through all the wrongs yet left undone, you always saw the light.

ย 
For each newย heart thatโ€™s brokenย yet another is repaired.
With sweet romantic tokens only two in love have shared.
To seal the bond between them, an entwining of the soul;
one piece without the other is to feel much less than whole.

ย 
Cruel winterโ€™s chill approached too soonโ€”we lost pure passion's flame.
And while theย snow fell soft and slow, obscured was who to blame.
ย Thoโ€™ harshest winds came howling like an frigid, arctic blast,
you touched the very core of meโ€”within your warmth, I basked.

ย 
Tho' sunlit days have passed too fast, slipped far beyond the veil,
thoseย whispered words, "I love youโ€,ย send fond memories a' sail.

ย 

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John DeFoore Jr

I enjoyed your write. Giving me food for thought
due to a wayward life, my life could be viewed as many failed attempts at love or as many short successes.
giving value to the attempts rather than loss due to failures.
indeed future fodder for thinking.
valuable read for meย 
thank you!
john

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Dean Kuch

Thank you very much for taking the time to read the poem, John.
Have a fantastic weekend.
~Dean

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Halo Pain

Excellence in words. Great job.

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Dean Kuch

Oh, flattery will get you everywhere with me, Lisa, heh-heh.
My name has been mentioned alongside the great EA Poe's on a few occasions. I can tell you this, I always consider it to be an honor.
Thanks so mcuh. Have a wonderful weekend.
~Dean :}

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WormTendon

Also very well written. ย I took the line "and while the snow fell soft and slow, obscured was who to blame."
to mean that the primary issue with the relationship was communication, and for me personally, the choice of word "obscure" put the idea in my head that this romance was of divine origin.

I believe you may be my new favorite writer here. ย Great stuff.

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