Poem -
When You're There
When my heart aches with the pain
When I think nothing will be the same
When a teardrop rolls down my cheek
When I am unsure of what it is I seek
When I constantly have to ask why
When I no longer see a reason to try
When the world seems to be falling apart
When a search for answers is hard to start
That is when I look to your love and pray
That is when I know guidance is on the way.
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Hey Sir Waters!!..........honestly ~ I was just kinda cruisin' along ~ until ~ those final two lines hit me like a ton of bricks........wow! ~ you are such a lucky man to have this kind of inspiration right there in the same room with you...........God Bless you brother!!.............hugz!!.............T xo
Glad you liked this ! I have been doing some longer writes lately so it was nice to do a shorter piece !!! :)
Wishing you all the best !!! :)
Hug !
Hello Richard...
Love this one too!
Hug! :)
sparrowsong
Thanks for saying so ! :)
Hug !
Richard,
Love the rhymes at play, in this piece my friend and even more, the faith surrendered in its deliverance ....There is power in prayer and this poem not only has it written all over it but it sounds as though you my friend, passionately posess it, with pride and conviction as well...Seeing it, doesn't necessarily have to constitute his works being real, in this case, (just as all others), all we have to do, is believe in it and him but most importantly, hold on to that belief, within our on hearts and relinquish ing it, only in the light of sharing his divine works in the life and through the eyes, of many more, besides us, to follow....Splendid piece my friend...
Cheers!
Jim
Glorious words my friend ! Thank you !
Best wishes to you !
:)
Quite welcome are you, my friend.....
Glide on,
Jim
:)