Poem -
Whispers Torrent
"You cruel little witch ,
now who's being the bitch.
I caught you of guard,
Rocket your world
dealt it hard.
You stutter your words,
with excuses absurd.
You'll be taking a fall,
cause I broke through it all.
You're a thorn in my side,
took my boyfriend then lied.
So I gave back my ring,
sort of threw the damn thing.
What's the matter now hun,
has the cat got your tongue.
He's played you and fooled me,
both were dumb you'll agree.
With this battle now won,
friendship's over, I'm done.
and I won't leave you sore
just know this, Your a "Whore"
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Gee whiz, Susan!
There's nothing wrong with a little healthy competition, is there, heh-heh?
After all, to the victor belongs the spoils ... or so it's been said.
"[Your] You're a thorn in my side,
took my boyfriend then lied." ... I believe you intended to write "you're" here—a contraction meaning, "you are".
This one's a real zinger!
~Dean :}
Thanks Dean, as much as I love a challenge, this one wasn't intentional. You know the feeling where you just feel like a spat, well this was one of those days. And so, I couldn't help myself when I saw the picture. Thanks for reading and for pointing out the spelling error, cheers for Easter x
Oh yeah, I know the feeling all too well, Susan.
You're more than welcome, my dear.
Hoppy Easter!
~Dean ???
Hey SUSAN!!..... This is powerful my friend.......a great use of poetic dialogue coupled with VERY compelling and ' easy to relate to' subject matter!!...I pray that this is a fiction sister girl !!......because, if not, I'm so sorry that you had to deal with such an ugly betrayal!...... well crafted write dear poet sister!!.......ALL STARS!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo
Hi Tony, your prayer was right, this wasn't fact. But I do love a challenge and could only guess by the picture what was going on between these two drama queens. The silence needed voice and I needed a rant. i just hope my story was tame compared to what they may have been saying to each other lol. Cheers for Easter x