Who Am I Really

Who am i really
In the mirror i stand there
With light brown skin and long black hair
Though you see me
Do you know me?
How i feel?
My personality?
Does it matter in reality?
Maybe not to you
But to me it does
The person in the mirror
Who it really was
Who am i really
Warm yet cold
Like a river flows
A heart with a current that never slows
This is who it is
This is me
In reality
Its what i see
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I think this is a good piece... I feel you on this and know where you are going with it as a writer. Keep them coming..
thank you!
nice write x
Asmaa
A powerful reality of an individual whom appears to discard all possibilities of illusional thinkings are ways of life, once again an i am who i am attitude, introvert some times when needed and extrovert on the occasions when this part of your self, needs be profiled.A surety to whom you are and where you are going in life and you are your own bus driver in charge of your on ideas in life and appears to be enjoying all of the accolades that accompanies your choices in life....Positive person and a book well written and read, not to be judged, simply by the cover that contains its presentations to its readers...
Kindest regards,
Jim
P.S.
William has added an extra spice to all poems, (for us all), that he has commented on, with the manner in which he has chosen to comment, it's a wonderful thing.
glad u enjoyed it jimmy thanks for the comment!
You are quite welcome Asmaa..
Take care,
Jim
hun this is poem really speaks out congrats hun its a great poem
thank!