Poem -

Who Can Say?

Who Can Say?

My world gets smaller day by day
Cause you're not here, you went away
Youโ€™d think a void you left so wide
would ย be so very hard to hide,
but no-one sees it lurking thereย 
itโ€™s almost like no body cares.
I walk around the yawningย  space
not recognising this lost place.
No door to exit, or come through
just empty blackness without you.
It might be better in this dark hole
to find a window to my soul.
To spend some time and meditate
about the sad and sorry state
our love was in before it died
and see perhaps if I had tried
a little more -then who can say?
If you would still be here today....

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A Lonely Journey

Oh Loki,ย 
That's beautiful, my friend! So heartbreaking-ly beautiful.ย 
Fantastic write.ย 

Hugs, Grammy.ย 

Matthew.ย 

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lodigiana

Thank you Matthew... into every life a little rain must fall ..luckily for me it fell many years ago but the memory of the feelings remain.. maybe as a reminder to take care of love a little more....big hugs honorary xxx

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A Lonely Journey

Lodi,ย 
You don't deserve any rain, you're too nice, but I guess if we didn't have rain the beautiful flowers would never grow(and you're a beautiful flower).ย 
Talk to you soon,ย 

Matthew.ย 

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Spike Graves

A place we all end up ag some milestone in are life

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lodigiana

Love is a very complex thing..thank you so much for reading and commenting I really appreciate it.

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Barry Childs

What a beautiful poem. Some sad thoughts last forever.ย  Barry x

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lodigiana

You are absolutely correct..those sad thoughts are hard dispel aren't they? fortunately love also brings us the unforgetably beautiful ones also...ah me...ย  love is certainlyย  a very strange beast!!! thank you so much for your lovely wordsย  Barryย 

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Terry Kay

Beautiful poem.ย  It's so hard to lose someone you love.ย  God Bless.ย  Terry Kay

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lodigiana

Thank you Terry, I think most of us have experienced the highs and lows of love...but life has to go on..really appreciate your kind words xx

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Hi Lodigiana....I think it is so hard to play the "would've, should've, could've" game.ย  The regrets come into mind.ย  It is always sad to watch a relationship fall apart, and live with the memories.ย  Very well depicted here...I love emotional writes.ย  You are very good, xo ;)ย 

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lodigiana

Hi Cherie, yes you are so right, but for every heartache one hopes to find equal and more amounts of heart joy! Ever the optimist! Thank so much for reading and commenting xxx

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lodigiana

You are so very kind my darling..and coming from you ... I am humbled xxx

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