Poem -
Witching hour
The sweet melody of your voice tempting my ears and my mind with mischief, the candy-coated aroma of your body summoning the wild beast that resides inside my body. No more man than animal I seek the intoxicating honey of your lips. Willing to die within your arms, for just another passionate feeling of your love in this witching hour.Β
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Hey POETRY FREEDOM!!!......this is gorgeous.......there's a great sense of timing in those phrases......I think they would be even more powerful if you broke your lines differently in your formatting (no offense, just a thought).......regardless, the passion that you've conveyed here is VERY compelling......a great read!!........ALL STARS.......well done......and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!......T xo
ps. the pic was perfect!!
Thank you so much! No offense taken its amazing to get feedback because it allows me to grow more as a writer
hello PF welcome to cosmos I love this!
Thanks I'm glad