Poem -
With Shame
Seeing the end
I finally ended
. what we were
I saw the end, I
I felt the hurt
my mind fell back
forced me to see
it wasn't love
"But"
a hate for me
everything he did
. caused pain
I lowered my head
"And"
cried with shame
I held on to what
never was
caused myself
pain
just because
i still hear the laughter
his rotten
" lies"
but that's just the
echos of my
" Good- byes".......
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Comments
A lovely melancholy TERESA!!.....beautifully expressed acceptance......and formatted BEATIFULLY as well........ALL STARS!!....well penned dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thanks Tony, your comments really made me feel better about sharing this poem. This poem was written thru a hard heartbreaking awareness for me. Again thanks for your kindness, very much appreciated.
Hi Teresa. Reading a poem of yours for the first time and i totally love the rhythm in this piece of heartache. Love the layout too. Its definitely my kind of thing. Beautifully expressed as Tony said. Look fwd to reading more of yours. Px
Thank you so much and it really made my day to hear you say how much you enjoyed the poem. It's one of my favorites, it tells how painful realization really is. Thanks again..
Hello Teresa, what a great write indeed. The awakening to a truth that really pains the heart. Loved your flow and structure which gave a good sense of falling. I also really loved those last lines.
i still hear the laughter
his rotten
" lies"
but that's just the
echos of my
" Good- byes"
A melancholy poem, written beautifully
Gwen x
Thank you Gwen for your sweet words. This poem is my favorite, because I lived this and I made it through one of the most painful times of my life, he was one of the worst narcissist I think there was ever born. Again thank you.
You are so very welcome, and I am so pleased you got away from such a vile human. Keep writing because you will reach out to many who feel trapped x
Beautiful x