Poem -
Wondering
I sit here, wondering as this life swallows me up, piece by piece. ย As I look for light , darkness appears. ย Life still trudges on dragging my lifeless pieces with it. ย Moving yet it hasn't budged. ย Confused is not the opposite but the exact. ย Although don't listen to what I'm not saying and don't follow me. ย I only lead to a deep dark hole where I sit in future's history. ย Because there I sit, wondering...who am I? Where am I?...And I wonder still...reality....is it here...or is it over there?
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Very Cool VENESSA!!...... you've captured the nature of wondering here!!...... the back and forth...... the dark and light that Is at the core of the meditative state of mind we commonly refer to as "Wondering" (smiles)......I do think that it might come across a little more powerfully if you broke your lines differently....... (just a thought -please don't take offense)...... poetry is poetry..... and this is well conceived and you've conveyed your intent beautifully.......ALL STARS...... well done...... and .......WELCOME to COSMO!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo