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YOU

YOU

Have you found what you’ve been searching for?

Those many days of endless wonder

I could never seem to have tamed that wild heart of yours

All you ever wanted was to be set free

You saw through my uncertainties

Used every tear to paint a memory

Loved me in a language that I could never understand

Words, a definite gift from above

A talent so rare, many could only dream of

You spoke to the light and danced with the darkness

Like a song it whispered to the darkest of hearts

And found peace within the loneliest of souls

Your energy will remain forever within these four walls

Like ripples from a raindrop falling into the ocean

So the vibrations of your echo will be remembered

Forever now, forever more

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Maddison Law

Erika your poetry is so beautiful but I think this one is my favourite
Maddison

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Erika Loots

Thank you Maddison, glad you like it :) 

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Excellent lines. My applause, My vote, Recommended for nomination

You spoke to the light and danced with the darkness

Like a song it whispered to the darkest of hearts

And found peace within the loneliest of souls

Your energy will remain forever within these four walls

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Erika Loots

Congrats on your winning nomination

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Erika Loots

Thank you so much, I appreciate it a lot :) Those are my favorite lines as well, thank you for reading my poetry and for your inspirational feedback :) 

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Georgina Richardson

A stunning piece sweety, well written and very well thought through. I wish I could nominate you too!!!

Love George xx

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Erika Loots

Thank you soo much Georgina, really glad that you liked it so much :) I wish so too!!

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Erika Loots

Thank you for your kind words :)

Love is just sometimes not enough. 

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