Poem -
You and I
Pointless Chicken
Nightlife
You're satisfied?
Think I`ll cry
Behind these eyes
Pointless chicken
That I believe in
That we`d reconcile
At night still dreaming
Hoping that
One day,
I could speak
To you
Again
But we stare with unbroken stars
Toxic fumes through the air
Pointless chickens in my head
Scars on scar tissue, Better off dead
I know you don't care
You gave up 4 years ago
How long have I known so?
That these wounds,
These wounds for me,
Are still bare.
The Fish of the Sea.
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Comments
Gorgeous poem TFOTS, I just love it!
Thanks, Bell! Honestly didn't think I hit the nail on the head with this one, but I`m glad you liked it. Best Wishes to you. TFOTS
Hey FISH!!
I can tell the wounds are still feeling fresh....even though it's been quite some time now......regardless ~
~ "Scars on scar tissue, better off dead..."
Interesting, how ALL poets carry some kind of painful scar tissue along with them.....thanx for sharing this dear poet brother!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Awww thanks, Tony and it's so very true, we all have our problems and different ways of getting over them. Seems like poetry is the way for me! Your comments always mean so much. Kind regards. TFOTS
Hi Fish,
Very nice write.
JP
Awww thanks so much, John, I`m glad you liked it. Kind regards. TFOTS
cool write...enjoyed the read....Fish of the Sea
Thanks, Lorris! Your comments always mean so much to me. Kind regards. TFOTS
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L poem. I enjoyed reading it, I felt the pain, the sorrow, the fear, I felt it all. Very well written.
Awww thanks so much, Stephanie, Glad my message got through. Things seem to be getting a bit better for me... Kind regards. TFOTS
Pointless chicken, I like the metaphor in the poem.
Thanks so much Edwin! A bit nonsensical, but I'm glad you found meaning in my work. Peace and happy holidays. The Fish of the Sea. (On vacay till after Christmas...)