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You are my sunshine

Jill's challenge ?

You are my sunshine

You are my sunshine,
My twisted sunshine,
You make me happy, when you're in slay,
You make me cackle,
At host in shackle,
As you take,
Their breath away.

You are my sunshine,
My slaughtered headline,
You make me proud, to be the one,
I love you even though they fear you,
Whatever happens, I'm always mom.

You all dare to fear him,
As though it's him,
The peril, of social life!
I'll remind you, that you're the sin!
You bullied him!
And now, you'll make friends...
With his knife! 

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Simon Bromley

Your are my sunshine lol. Just popped in my head.  I did your challenge posted previous.

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Being Me

Twisted sunshine definitely ?  I love this..you have written this really well x

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Simon Bromley

Lol thank you.  I wasn't so sure at first but I thought why deny it when it just came out lol.

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Pratibha Savani

Wow definately a reverse of sunshine. Great writing piece to a song and making it yours. Clever. ?

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Simon Bromley

Lol thank you, I never expected to receive such a response thank you do much.  I'm currently working on my next challenge for everyone ?

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Jill Tait

OMG this is so clever Abfab Simon Thanks for making me smile loads ?❀️❀️❀️Pinned xxx

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Simon Bromley

You're welcome Jill lol I enjoyed singing it in my head ?.

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Jill Tait

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