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You Blame

As I inhale the toxins of this forbidden fruit

thousands of chemicals demand entry with muddy feet

burning their lasting puncture wounds

Looks of judgment are nearby as I exhale

bringing a silent war between

the smoker and the non-smoker

Deeply breathing in each sweet charcoaled dream

Each poisonous lungful takes away

years spent polluting the air and my youthful body

Dangerously craving more of those

sardine-packed, pocket-sized cardboard boxes

Stain my breath with your cancerous army

The monsters chewing away at my cells

What kind of twisted logic alters my mind to find delight?

This self-destruction was found to be voluntary; A senseless act

But once I perish, to whom shall I blame?

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Christopher Correia

it does seem ironic and short sighted that many find delight in things proven to be harmful, are we but minions of a lesser god, or defiant to the laws of reason?  Who knows, Perri, but I'll tell you what, this is a very good poem, brilliantly constructed with thoughtfulness and poetic shine, a terrific post, poet    

'This self-destruction was found to be voluntary; A senseless act

But once I perish, to whom shall I blame?'

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Perri O'Connor

Very ironic! I am glad you liked it! Thank you Chris, much love and appreciation coming your way!

P.S. You have some pretty rad poems yourself! 

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