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Your pace is good.

Your pace is good it's your constitution that needs work.

Your stride is fast enough, it's your hell bent, but what if I'mΒ  responsible that needs adjusting.Β 

Your not going around in circles there is no end in the eternity symbol.Β 

there's no way back its a dead end with strings.Β 

Your doing well, even if you don't feel like you have done so.Β 

Your walking, wherever, whether tall or bent, slumbering or spent, dragging along or burning at both ends.Β 

your getting there, slowly and surely or dazed and confused.Β 

Keep up the pace taking note of your constitution.Β 

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Gwendoline

A clever write Liliana, I do love how you are never afraid to dig deeply into subject matters. For me this sings of hope and strength in belief. Regardless of the turmoil around or effecting them. Like the blind leading the blind, that is what I felt here.

Brilliant work πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘
Gwen xΒ 

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Liliana of the ...

Oh wow seriously.Β 
Im glad you you mentioned hope that was the name I was going to give the baby I lost at 19.Β 

So thank you for not being blind my dear.Β 

I hope you are well and happy.Β 

And I love your raw honesty also.Β 
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