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Avalon Part1

Avalon Part1

Murmurs from a calling awaken the soul. Immersed in tranquility, a fine blanket embraces.
Then like a fountain spring, its cool seduction breaths in life. Its torrent lays dormant, no
longer will it allow the wilderness of textured coral to hide the view. Then slowly as if in 
bloom, each tentacle begins to peel back, savoring the essence they hold from within.

Dark hair dances freely about her shoulders. Like carpet, its strands soak up the delight
that entices its rich luster. long lashes rise, enabling sleep to succumb. Then from her 
nestled plantation, she peers into open water. Her gaze widens as the scenery draws her
into its perfect effect. She can hear the echoes of song, as those of the deep embrace 
her existence. Through the ocean waters they peer. Only the  beady eyes of a few scurry
away, their emotions run high with this newest of species.

Ripples begin to nudge at her tenderly. Their persuasion won't relent on insisting she explore 
the secrets that lie beneath. Like a gentle hand, its caresses lap at her skin. They soak up the 
purity of what has been achieved. Like an enchanted dream, her eyes widen as illuminating 
effect enriches her sanctuary. She cannot resist its captivating lure a moment longer.

Attached to her slender frame, a bright silver tail fans. It continues to sweep from side to side.
Embedded in its luster are hundreds of miniature scales, all perfectly patterned, just as her maker
had intended.

Her crafted physique has been perfected by something more than just chance. Deceit had lured her
into the finest of temptation. Its master plan had finally worked. No longer would she be able to run 
the shoreline, feel the soft sand beneath her feet. It had secured her a place beyond any form of 
understanding. Its longing had paid off. It had mapped her into a piece of its glorious wonder.
She had become, the Ocean's finest masterpiece.

 

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Susan Chetcuti

Thanks so much Linda, its actually the beginning of a novel I've just started. I just wanted some feedback on the beginning to see if its going to be worth my while in writing it. Thanks for taking the time to read it. 

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