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His presence

His presence

He breezes a shudder that grips her soul
an emotional presence that awakens a past,
captured in the romance of mystic.
Through the window the atmosphere blows a kiss
as tears fall through the echoes that surround the room.
Surreal, an effect as the wind disturbs the silence.
There is no breathe with whom it swept in,
but a faint figure that desires to touch her skin.
Her heart skips a beat as spirit and soul rekindle a flame.
The ghost of him remembers the warmth of love
as his shadow breaths cold.
She whispers his name as she captures a glance,
a haunted reflection that reaches out.
It's an unbelievable reality that comforts her,
to reminisce a time before passion slipped away.
As the mist embraces the occasion of an essence,Β 
he is able to shower her, his final goodbye.
Β 

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! SUSAN!!......this is beautiful....a powerful goodbye to say the very least......it stirs the imagination of the reader.....because of the well chosen words that create a kind of haunting phrasing ~

Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  ~ "The ghost of him remembers the warmth of love
Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β As the atmosphere breathes cold...."

Fantastic writing dear poet sister!!.....ALL STARS & PINNED!!......another fine poem to add to your portfolio!!.....Truly creative!!......Bravo!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xoΒ  : )

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Susan Chetcuti

Thanks for reading it Tony and keep up your fantastic work. It’s been awhile since I ventured this sightπŸ˜™

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Jim "The Lad" ....

enchanting!..........................................................................................Jim

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

A hauntingly beautiful poem, expressed superbly wow!! Kudos for this muse.

Plz also read and comment my newest poem tooΒ 

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