Poem -
All That Glitters
All that glitters ain't gold
But truth be told
I bought what you sold
Your like a diamond to me
Beautiful and shiny
I'm in awe of your precious metal
Your touch is of a silky golden rose petal
Staring at me through Sapphire
Tinted lenses
Putting in my mind a vision of picket fences
Your skin is pearlescent and I want to cash in
Your not a prize to be won but still the trophy I aim to win
You sparkle like a cloth sewn with silver
A monument to beauty so iced out I shiver
That's why i will never need you to give me jewelry
Because your worth your weight in gold to me
By LukeCoomer (c)
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Comments
Thank you Cherie I at least wanted her to feel that way lol
this poem speaks for itself rhymes well like the last line also linda
Hi Luke I like the comparison of of precious metal
and gems to this lady that`s held in great esteem
Original phrasing that flows so well
Just a thought last but one line should it be" I"and not
you? will never need you to give me jewelry"
Great write
Best wishes Debs
Haha I just re read it again and you are right I will fix it thanks
Deborah
thank you but I was saying she should never have to give me jewelry because she's worth her weight in gold
Luke
Reads lovely the last two lines are perfect :-)
Hey LUKE!!....CONGRATS on getting the nod from administration on this piece ......a lovely use of phrasing to describe the beauty in precious metals and use the comparison to create a VERY creative poem where the woman integral to the heart of the write is left sparkling as much as the poem itself......ALL STÄRS!!.......well done brother poet!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?